radio ad transcript

for those of you who are interested i’m putting up the initial script for our radio ad that will run on wifc & the valley. here’s the rough draft

[MX:  ROCK!!!!]

[SFX:  BIG ENGINE REV]

MONSTER TRUCK ANCR:  SUNDAY!  SUNDAY!  SUNDAY!  You’re gonna be BORED!  BORED!  BORED!  You’re gonna hear PREACHING and LECTURING!  You’re gonna sing the same tired hymns you’ve singing since you were 5 YEARS OLD!  You’re going to STRUGGLE to stay AWAKE the entire time!  OH YEAH!  Church is gonna be AWESOME!

[SFX:  BIG explosion]

[END MX AND SFX]

ROBERT:  Or, maybe you could try a church that’s a little less, you know, church-y.

[MX:  CURRENT POP]

ROBERT:  A church like Tapestry Church in Stevens Point.  At Tapestry, we believe that faith is about Jesus, not a building or old traditions.  You’ll find someone talking with you, instead of at you.  Who knows?  You may even find that you like coming to church again.  Hi, I’m Robert Terrell the pastor of Tapestry.  If you’re feeling disconnected from your faith, see if Tapestry Church can re-connect you.  Join us for Tapestry’s first service at 6 the evening of Sunday, September 14th at Washington Elementary School in Stevens Point.  To learn more about Tapestry Church, visit us online at S-P-tapestry-dot-org.

the idea of the monster truck commercial makes me laugh.

2 Replies to “radio ad transcript”

  1. I like it!

    I might say this:

    “If you’re feeling disconnected from your faith”…

    OR WERE NEVER CONNECTED TO BEGIN WITH, SEE IF TAPESTRY CHURCH CAN CONNECT YOU.

    To me this specifically speaks to the never-churched crowd…just my 2 cents…that’s almost 6 New Peruvian SOLES!!!

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